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This table below shows percentages of satisfaction that First-Year students rated their modules in five aspects in 2014.

主體段分段方法：

主體1：Pre-Course info、Teaching、Tutor

主體2：Resource(print)、Resource(other)

開頭段

The table illustrates the proportions of first-year students who were satisfied with three subjects (Economics, Law and Commerce) across five aspects in 2014.

概述段

Overall, Commerceachieved the highest satisfaction levelsacross all five categories.Whilestudents in Economics and Commercewere most satisfied withteaching quality, Lawlagged behindin this area.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- Commerce三個(gè)方面的好評(píng)率最高

- Economics、Commerce在teaching的好評(píng)率最高，但Law在teaching的好評(píng)率最低

Body paragraph 1

It is clear thatthe three modulesdiffered significantly regardingteaching-related criteria. Commerceperformed exceptionally well, with 95% of students expressing satisfaction with pre-course information,compared withjust 59% for Economics.Likewise, 95% of the surveyed students were satisfied with teaching quality in Economics and Commerce, while Lawrecorded the lowest figureat just 62%.A similar pattern was observedfor tutoring sessions, where Commerce and Economicsscored above90%,compared with a noticeably lower figure forLaw (76%).

思路要點(diǎn)：Pre-Course info、Teaching、Tutor

- 這三個(gè)方面，三個(gè)學(xué)科的滿意度比例差距較大

- Pre-Course info：Commerce滿意度最高(95%)，但Economics僅為59%

- Teaching：Economics、Commerce都為95%，Law仍然排最后一位(62%)

- Tutor：Commerce、economics滿意度都超過了90%，但law數(shù)據(jù)較低(72%)

Body paragraph 2

However,satisfaction with resources showed less significant variations, as the difference among the three subjects was under 20%. Commerce stilltook the lead, with over 80% giving positive feedback to both printed and other materials. Paper materials for economics were favored by 81% of the students,roughly 20% higher thanthe rate for other resources.Conversely, 70% of students expressed satisfaction with printed resources provided by the Department of Law, which wasslightly lower thanthe 80% recorded for other resources.

思路要點(diǎn)：Resource(print)、Resource(other)

- 這兩個(gè)方面，三個(gè)學(xué)科滿意度差異不大，在20%以內(nèi)

- Commerce：滿意度仍舊最高，兩個(gè)resource的滿意度都超過80%

- Economics：resource(print)滿意度為81%，比resource(other)高了約20%

- Law：resource(print)滿意度為70%，但resource(other)滿意度為80%

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