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The maps below show the layouts of two kitchens.

主體段分段：一圖一段

開頭段

The two maps illustrate the layouts of two kitchens, comparing their size, structure and internal facilities.

概述段

Overall, both kitchens contain essential elements such as cupboards, a frozen area, and facility rooms. Kitchen Bis considerably larger,featuringadditional facilities including more cupboards, additional facility rooms, and a dining area.

思路要點：

- 兩個廚房都有cupboard、frozen area、facility room

- Kitchen B面積更大，有更多的cupboard和一個餐飲區(qū)

Body paragraph 1

Kitchen Ameasures3 meters in length and 2.5 meters in width. The entranceis located in the top left corner,adjacent toa frozen area.The left sideof the kitchenis dominated bytwo cupboards: a smaller square one and a larger L-shaped one. A third cupboardis positioned in the top-right corner,directly abovea washing room.Further southis another L-shaped cupboard.At the bottom ofthe kitchen is a rectangular facility room, with two chopping spaces nearby.

思路要點：Kitchen A

- Kitchen長3米，寬2.5米

- entrance位于左上角，毗鄰frozen area

- 左側(cè)有兩個cupboard（一個小面積、正方形，另一個大面積、L形）

- 右上角有另一個cupboard，它位于WC北邊；再往南是另一個L形的cupboard

- 底部是facility room，附近有兩片chopping space

Body paragraph 2

In contrast, Kitchen B ismore spaciousat 5 meters in length and 2.5 meters in width.Immediately insidethe entranceon the top-left sectionis a rectangular table with chairs.UnlikeKitchen A,the upper-left corneris occupied by a cupboard,whilea larger frozen areais placed at the top-right.Similar tothe design of Kitchen A,the left sidealso houses two cupboards, with another threelocated on the opposite side.However, the W/Cis positioned on the southern edge,just next totwo separate facility rooms.As inKitchen A, two chopping areasare situated on both sides ofthe kitchen,althoughthey take up more space.

思路要點：Kitchen B

- 左上角entrance入口進(jìn)入，有一個table，周圍有chairs

- 與Kitchen A不同，左上角是一個cupboard，但一個更大尺寸的frozen area位于右上角

- 與Kitchen A相似，左側(cè)也有兩個cupboard，對面是另外的三個cupboard

- W/C位于底部，臨近兩個單獨的facility room

- 兩組chopping space位于左邊、右邊，但面積更大，有助于提高效率

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