10月18日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 某些法律執(zhí)行困難的原因以及解決方法

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2025年10月18日雅思大作文題目

Certain laws have little effect now because it is difficult for the police to enforce them. Why is that? How can this problem be solved?

題目分析：這道題目屬于典型的報告類（reason---solution)題目，要求考生對于法律執(zhí)行困難（law enforcement difficulty）進(jìn)行原因分析并提出解決方案；題目核心是：某些法律難以執(zhí)行，導(dǎo)致效果不佳，原因是什么？如何解決？

關(guān)鍵詞：

? Certain laws：不是全部法律，而是“某些”法律，寫作時要具體化。

? Little effect：法律無效或效果差。

? Difficult for the police to enforce：警察執(zhí)法難是核心原因。

原因分析：

(1) 技術(shù)進(jìn)步催生了新型漏洞，而滯后的執(zhí)行手段無法應(yīng)對；

(2) 資源短缺阻礙了法律的及時執(zhí)行；

解決方法：

1) 加強(qiáng)技術(shù)應(yīng)用；

2) 國際合作；

3) 完善立法；

范文及解析

Introduction

In contemporary society, a number of laws, due to enforcement challenges, have become ineffective, undermining the authority of the legal system. To address this issue, it is essential to identify its root causes and then propose targeted remedies.

解析

? enforcement n. 執(zhí)行，實施;

? undermine v. 逐漸削弱(損害);

? address v. 處理，設(shè)法解決;

? remedy n. 解決方法，糾正方法;

譯文參考

在當(dāng)代社會，部分法律因執(zhí)行難題而失效，這損害了法律體系的權(quán)威。要解決此問題，關(guān)鍵在于找出其根本原因，并提出具有針對性的應(yīng)對措施。

Body paragraph 1

Two primary factors stand out in the law enforcement challenge. First, in the digital age, advances in technology have created new loopholes that outdated enforcement methods cannot address. Cybercrime laws, for example, struggle to keep pace with anonymous online activities; hackers can operate across borders, and tracing their identities requires sophisticated tools that many law enforcement agencies lack. As a result, police rarely apprehend suspects immediately, allowing many perpetrators to remain at large. Furthermore, resource shortages hinder the timely enforcement of laws. For instance, in many developing countries, the number of traffic police is far from sufficient to monitor every road, making it easy for drivers to violate speed limits or run red lights without being caught.

解析

? loophole n. (法律、合同等的)漏洞，空子;

? cybercrime n. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪;

? anonymous adj. 匿名的,不記名的;

? hacker n. 黑客，駭客;

? sophisticated adj. 復(fù)雜巧妙的，先進(jìn)的，精密的; 水平高的;

? apprehend v. 逮捕，拘押;

? perpetrator n. 犯罪者；作惡者；

v hinder v. 阻礙，妨礙;

譯文參考：

法律執(zhí)行難題的核心凸顯于兩大因素。其一，在數(shù)字時代，技術(shù)進(jìn)步催生了新型漏洞，而滯后的執(zhí)行手段無法應(yīng)對。例如，網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪相關(guān)法律難以跟上匿名網(wǎng)絡(luò)活動的步伐：黑客可跨境操作，而追蹤其身份所需的精密技術(shù)工具，是許多執(zhí)法機(jī)構(gòu)所欠缺的。這導(dǎo)致警方極少能即時抓獲嫌疑人，使得眾多違法者逍遙法外。其二，資源短缺阻礙了法律的及時執(zhí)行。以諸多發(fā)展中國家為例，交通警察數(shù)量遠(yuǎn)不足以實現(xiàn)全路段監(jiān)控，這使得駕駛員超速、闖紅燈等違法行為極易逃脫處罰。

Body paragraph 2

To resolve this complex issue, tailored measures are urgently required. Governments must equip law enforcement agencies with AI systems that can automatically trace fund flows and identify fraud patterns. This advanced technology is exactly what can bridge the gap between virtual crimes and traditional investigative methods. Additionally, international cooperation is equally important. For example, creating shared databases of cyber criminals can speed up cross-border arrests. Finally, laws themselves should be revised to align with social reality. If a law is widely regarded as unrealistic or unfair, legislators should conduct public consultations and adjust its provisions to ensure it is both reasonable and enforceable.

解析

? tailored adj. 特制的，專門的;

? automatically adv. 自然地，必然地; 自動地;

? fraud n. 欺詐，騙局，詭計;

? bridge the gap 縮短差距 ; 縮小差別;

? investigative adj. 研究的；調(diào)查的；

? revised adj. 修正過的，經(jīng)過修改的;

? align with reality 與現(xiàn)實相符;

? legislator n. 立法者，立法委員;

? consultation n. 商討，磋商，磋商會議; 咨詢;

? provision. n. 條款，規(guī)定;

? enforceable adj. 可實施的；可強(qiáng)行的；

譯文參考：

要解決這一復(fù)雜問題，亟需采取針對性措施。首先，政府需為執(zhí)法機(jī)構(gòu)配備能夠自動追蹤資金流向、識別詐騙模式的人工智能系統(tǒng)，該先進(jìn)技術(shù)正是彌合虛擬犯罪與傳統(tǒng)偵查手段之間差距的關(guān)鍵。其次，國際合作同樣至關(guān)重要。例如，建立網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪嫌疑人共享數(shù)據(jù)庫可加快跨境抓捕效率。最后，法律本身需修訂以貼合社會現(xiàn)實：若某部法律被普遍認(rèn)為不切實際或有失公允，立法者應(yīng)開展公眾咨詢并調(diào)整條款內(nèi)容，確保其兼具合理性與可執(zhí)行性。

Conclusion

In a nutshell, the ineffectiveness of certain laws can be ascribed to outmoded law enforcement practices and resource scarcity. Only through technological upgrading, augmented international collaboration, and greater public engagement can law enforcement capabilities be heightened, thereby ensuring that laws truly serve to safeguard society.

解析

? be ascribed to 歸因于;

? outmoded adj. 過時的，不流行的;

? scarcity n. 不足，缺乏;

? augmented adj. 增廣的；增音的；

? collaboration n. 合作，協(xié)作; 勾結(jié);

? heighten v. 提高，增強(qiáng);

譯文參考：

綜上，部分法律之所以失效，其根源在于執(zhí)法方式陳舊與資源短缺。唯有通過技術(shù)升級、強(qiáng)化國際合作及深化公眾參與，方能提升執(zhí)法效能，進(jìn)而確保法律切實發(fā)揮社會保障作用。

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